A BEAUTIFUL POEM BUT, POORLY INTERPRETED

 

 

In this poem, I put the considerations of the soul in Blue and my answers in Red.

In the development of my text, although I commend the Catholic Church, I do not diminish the beliefs of other religions or other Christian denominations. I wanted to bring my little seed of understanding which I hope will serve as light to more than one.

This poem is beyond all relationships…….*

_When I’m dead…..,_
_Your tears will flow,.._
_But I won’t know…_

*Cry with me now instead!*

(Wrong, you should try not to come back in this valley of suffering and tears.)

_You will send flowers, _
_But I won’t see…_

*Send them now instead!*

(No dear soul, you were unfortunately so busy trying to possess all the world that’s why I could show you my real feelings for you now.)

_You’ll say words of praise,.._
_But I won’t hear.._

*Praise me now instead!*

(Praising you in the world would make your ego too big. Now they are done do lift you up in all humility.)

_You’ll forget my faults,…._
_But I won’t know….._

*Forget them now, instead!*

(I have learned not to judge, that why I never reminded you of any wrongdoing , now , I am there to encourage you to not take self-pity on you, that is why.)

_You’ll miss me then,…_
_But I won’t feel…_
*Miss me now, instead*

(More than ever you will feel it because you are now endowed with a loving sentiment to accept my sincere feeling about you.)

_You’ll wish…_
_You could have spent more time with me, _

*Spend it now instead!*

(We were not meant to be bound in attachment in order for us to go about our salvation which is personal. That was not selfishness)

1 comment

  1. The writer in the RED is playing fun. I don’t think he/she knows the gratitude of the Poem. I am wasting my time. The Poem speaks volumes to all relationship.

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